Assassins Creed

Well this was a good attempt and the final result is good. it must have taken a long time to do this i know but still i've seen a lot of assassin's creed fanart. so im like not a sugarcoater. so this is what i really think about ur pic.
1. the drawing could be improved. this sorta looks like a chibi version of assassins creed. try to improve details on the dress an the hands also dont look so good. the ones that are holding the box.
2. the coloring is a lot better than the drawing. ur sense of light and shadow is good.the shade that xomes under the hood has been done well. although i think it would've been better iif u shded the entire part without showing the eyes like in those posters of assassins creed. they have a bigger impact as it says that the charachter is very mysterious and shady.
3. The background is great. u have shaded it well and it is drawn really well. but it doesnt sort of merge into the foreground and the whole thing kinda looks a bit dull so it lowers the impactas well.
I know i criticised u a lot but plz dont think i;m trying to hurt ur feelings. i just want u to improve. i know this took a really long time and that requires the great pateince but if u spent that much time then y ont spend a bit more and make it a masterpeice. i hope i havent been too rude. if i have plz do forgive me
Allthe best for future drawings!